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《The Godfather》

the shooting of Don Corleone [ 本帖最后由 eileen_tang 于 2008-12-14 11:21 PM 编辑 ]
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Out in the street the early winter light was failing. Freddie leaned casually against the fender of the heavy Buick. When he saw his father come out of the building Freddie went out into the street to the driver’s side of the car and got in. Don Corleone was about to get in on the sidewalk side of the car when he hesitated and then turned back to the long open fruit stand near the corner. This had been his habit lately, he loved the big out-of-season fruits, yellow peaches and oranges, that glowed in their green boxes. The proprietor sprang to serve him. Don Corleone did not handle the fruit. He pointed. The fruit man disputed his decisions only once, to show him that one of his choices had a rotten underside. Don Corleone took the paper bag in his left hand and paid the man with a five-dollar bill. He took his change and, as he turned to go back to the waiting car, two men stepped from around the corner. Don Corleone knew immediately what was to happen.

The two men wore black overcoats and black hats pulled low to prevent identification by witnesses. They had not expected Don Corleone's alert reaction.He dropped the bag of fruit and darted toward the parked car with startling quickness for a man of his bulk. At the same time he shouted,"Fredo,Fredo." It was only then that the two men drew their guns and fired.

The first bullet caught Don Corleone in the back. He felt the hammer shock of its impact but made his body move toward the car. The next two bullets hit him in the buttocks and sent him sprawling in the middle of the street. Meanwhile the two gunmen,careful not to slip on the rolling fruit,started to follow in order to finish him off. At that moment,perhaps no more than five seconds after the Don's call to his son,Frederico Corleone appeared out of his car,looming over it. The gunmen fired two more hasty shots at the Don lying in the gutter.One hit him in the fleshy part of his arm and the second hit him in the calf of his right leg. Though these wounds were the least serious they bled profusely,forming small pools of blood beside his body.But by this time Don Corleone had lost consciousness.

Freddie had heard his father shout,calling him by his childhood name,and then he had heard the first two loud reports. By the time he got out of the car he was in shock,he had not even drawn his gun. The two assassins could easily have shot him down. But they too panicked. They must have known the son was armed,and besides too much time had passed. They disappeared around the corner,leaving Freddie alone in the street with his father's bleeding body. Many of the people througing the avenue had flung themselves into doorways or on the ground,others had huddled together in small groups.

Freddie still had not drawn his weapon. He seemed stunned. He stared down at his father’s body lying face down on the tarred street, lying now in what seemed to him a blackish lake of blood. Freddie went into physical shock. People eddied out again and someone, seeing him start to sag, led him to the curbstone and made him sit down on it. A crowd gathered around Don Corleone’s body, a circle that shattered when the first police car sirened a path through them. Directly behind the police was the Daily News radio car and even before it stopped a photographer jumped out to snap pictures of the bleeding Don Corleone. Afew moments later an ambulance arrived. The photographer turned his attention to Freddie Corleone, who was now weeping openly, and this was a curiously comical sight, because of his tough, Cupid-featured face, heavy nose and thick mouth smeared with snot. Detectives were spreading through the crowd and more police cars were coming up.One detective knelt beside Freddie, questioning him, but Freddie was too deep in shock to answer. The detective reached inside Freddie’s coat and lifted his wallet. He looked at the identification inside and whistled to his partner. In just a few seconds Freddie had been cut off from the crowd by a flock of plainclothesmen. The first detective found Freddie’s gun in its shoulder holster and took it. Then they lifted Freddie off his feed and shoved him into an unmarkerd car. As that car pulled away it was followed by the Daily New radio car. The photographer was still snapping pictures of everybody and everything.


[ 本帖最后由 eileen_tang 于 2008-12-14 11:49 PM 编辑 ]
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教父从办公大楼走出来,对门口靠在黑色汽车左边的Freddie说,“你等我一会儿,Freddie,我去买一点水果。”Freddie说:“好的,爸爸。”教父向黑色汽车后面,街对面的水果店径直走去,Freddie转身把黑色汽车车门打开,坐在驾驶座上,关车门。
教父沿着一排水果摊的外侧向店里面走,一边对站在水果摊里侧的店主说:“圣诞快乐,我想要一点水果。”
店主说:“圣诞快乐”,拿起一个装水果的纸袋。
教父指着橘子说“这个”,店主:“好的”,走到橘子框边。
教父在橘子框边停下来,“你装吧。”
店主说:“好的”,然后用左手把橘子往右手上的袋子里装,
教父往回走,店主在摊的里侧跟着教父向外走。
教父在一种绿色水果前停下来,用右手指着说“再要点这个”。
店主说“好”。装水果。
他们继续向店外走,继续挑水果。水果店前有人走过。
这时,有两个穿着风衣、戴着帽子的人从街对面右侧的人行道向教父走来,他们的右手插在衣服包里,似乎拿着什么东西。
教父抬头看见了他们。
他们在街对面的人行道拐到马路上,越走越快,小跑了起来。
教父感觉不妙,赶快转身,准备向街对面左侧的黑色汽车方向跑。
只见这两个人拔出枪,向教父开火。
教父呼唤着Freddie的名字,慌乱之下,他把水果摊上的水果弄了一地。
但是他还是中了枪,他倒在黑色汽车的车头上,那两个人在水果摊前,毫无遮掩地朝他不停开枪。
Freddie慌忙打开车门,右手拿着枪欲向那两个人开枪,但是手却不停地抖,枪落到地上。
等他镇静下来的时候,那两个朝他父亲开枪的人已经逃了。
教父痛苦地从车头处倒在地上。
Freddie蹲下来,摘下帽子,抱着头,守着教父旁边哭泣。
旁边的路人围了过来。
Freddie呼唤着父亲。
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